I'll start with what I liked:
- topic: brotherhood and second generation Italian from African origin.
- music
Here what I think was weak:
- dialogues (script was often weird and forced)
- timeline (2 massive jumps to give context that to me fell flat on developing attachment to any character.
- character development (part is the weird timeline where each story seems cut short but part is some of the secondary characters that to me were not necessary such as the mum and the friend that creates the music).
- useless lies to create drama... No point in Paco lying about the contract as it's such a short lived lie.
- characters too easily convinced (girlfriend that is convinced about being part of the baby's life after 5 minutes with T. T is convinced of becoming the father after 5 minutes with the friend...
- where are so I'll services in all this?