This film makes you think someone held a gun lto the writer's head and forced him to write a screenplay in four hours. He immediately stole from Dial M for Murder, Another Man's Poison and Diabolique. "He only steals from the best."

Still, I can't help but get the impression this guy has potential. It is as if he tried too hard to cram as much plot as he could into one movie. I think if he started out smaller, like episodic TV and practiced making simpler stuff work, he could tackle much more. This wasn't bad so much as rushed. Oh, and dialogue is pretty bad.

Keep writing! Start with what you know and add what you feel. I really think you're going to do some great stuff in the future.